iron man who??

Uhhhh...shouldnt the MBO like gotten involved or summ?

Uhhhhhh . . . locked at 10 chapters. k.

Love your novel so far, but this chapter just wasn't it

Mediocre and not in the good way. Also how you finna have the book cover with the correct spelling of "conqueror" but have it be wrong as the TITTLE of the book LOL. Now to the actual review. Story: The story is bland, it's nothing new. And even if it was made out to be a rehash/mix-match of all of the other similar "died then reincarnate as a godly abomination with a system", it's still bland. If there was an outline of this genre of a novel, this would sadly be it. With that said it might improve later on, but I would have no ability to know that as it is currently locked after only 18 CHAPTERS. And I would genuinely be surprised if anybody spends even their fast pass let alone god forbid coins on this novel. And as far as characters and interactions between characters go, it sounds and behaves like you would expect of this novel...unrealistic and off-putting. And also oddly demanding as well. I also understand that this "author" is not a fluent English speaker, but with that said, Grammarly is free and he/she would greatly benefit from such a service. All in all, I would not recommend this novel, check it out if you so wish, but I would advise against spending your coins or passes on this novel.

The only top-notched thing about this novel is its updates. It's a bit too early to say anything too extensive about the story, but by the way thigns are progressing, this novel seems to be like that of any generic overpowered MC novel. Also, get a proofreader or an editor or use Grammerly or just spend like 15 minutes rereading and editing your own work. It would benefit both the novel and improve the readers' experience. The typical overpowered MC story. With that said, it's still decent for a quick glance

STOLEN WORK. There are already over 300 translated chapters and this delinquent is just copy pasting from the other people's work. PLEASE GET THIS TAKEN DOWN!!!

Great start so far man. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Keep up the good work :))

Grammar is alright, but other than that . . . why in the absolute doodoo is it locked after ONLY 3 CHAPTERS????? How are readers supposed to know the plot or if they even like it enough to spend coins on it after only reading 3 CHAPTERS?????

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please hurry mister author, I'm already showing withdrawal symptoms :(((((