Review Detail of 0_Jordinio_0 in Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

I began rewriting it because attempting the typical web-novel system trash just bugged me when I attempted it.

So far it looks really good, so a helpful hint of advice from a harem enthusiast is to keep it tame and vanilla...and most lemons can be done off screen...Make the harem about love and not Pokemon...and you will do just fine.

Is this dropped?

Im still waiting for this to be updated

man, I'm a fan of yours, especially the Yugioh fanfic you write, stacking the deck, but all the fanfics you write are unfinished, it's really frustrating. English is not my mother tongue, sorry if there are many spelling mistakes.

Are u going to leave this fic halfway, cuz please don't it's really good

bro you have a good talent writing, it's just that it frustrates us when we start reading your fanfics only for you to leave us blueballed constantly

Well, can't really do that anymore, authors can only upload 20 stories on this website. So I can really only upload one more, and that's just from replacing an abandoned thing.

by the emperor and the chaos gods I swear I'll read it just don't drop it

Will you ever go back to your old story’s like the tales of demons and gods one?

why do u keep making new works when none of your previous good works are completed? also it's not like they didn't receive support they are pretty good fics yet u just drop them and hop on to new one for no good reason.

Tales of Demons and Gods is at the farthest back, cuz I'm waiting on it getting more chapters.

While I like your other stories, I think this one is the best so far just from the development alone. It doesn't feel too rushed nor does it feel like he's already trying to fight the big leagues when the story hasn't gotten far yet. I'm only full of praise with the way you're managing your OC's power-levels right now. Judging from his plans and the cover, you seem to plan to get him Isobu later on in order to fight the increasingly OP enemies later in the story. I hope you don't lose your direction and motivation, Author. Looking forward to how this story will turn out.

Bruh bro tales of demons and gods has 381,5 chapters out and the novel schould be by now finisched

When I wrote the Tales of Demons and Gods fanfic, it had 330 chapters.

Author bro you are writing fanfic not a comic could‘nt you write to the draconic realm arc and then wait

It's the motivation that is the problem. There's so few fanfictions and such to keep me in the mood.

Ah je the motivation that is i hope you regain you motivation some day and have you ever thaugt about writing tensei slime fanfic ?

There is none bro, your chilling

Is there clone playing around with girls in this fic Author bro.