Gonna be shameless and leave a review for this masterpiece. Maybe not really a masterpiece but do give it a read and hopefully you all will enjoy it ,
The_Fake_God
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LIKEI can make a bet with you that for normal humans like us, a cultivation world is no less than a dystopia whereas the why the cultivation world in my novel is a dystopia (even though just a normal cultivation world is also a dystopia), it's all planned as the twist will come. for now, even in the 160th chapter, MC Zhao Luo is still training a technique that he can use in the Outer disciple tournament but once he starts leaving the sect for missions then slowly the evil and cruelty happening around the Xin Sect will be focused on! btw think of the mc as a lucky guy who ended up in a good place but the conditions on the surrounding mountain ranges are way worse in such a way that except the northeast zone all the other zones have extremely evil cultivators
Sin_of_GREED:what does this have other than the usual cultivation standard that makes it a dystopian world to me it sounds exactly the same old cultivation world ?
Nope acc to u all japanese isekai r also dystopian đđ bro dystopian is only used when world is very similar to real one but is flawed in some ways read summary of some dystopian novels will cultivation world is totally different from our earth đ second since u merge earth or whatever u say to this world then about the rest of world second u see while ur world is world of sects in reality if such was to happen then the aristocracy would the major organization or religious type organization anyway I got more than enough knowledge from ur reply it's a cultivation novel which might have some high tech buried here and there which mc would discover who knows after hundreds of chapters well thanks for replying thou it turned out to not what I expected hope you success in ur novel
The_Fake_God:I can make a bet with you that for normal humans like us, a cultivation world is no less than a dystopia whereas the why the cultivation world in my novel is a dystopia (even though just a normal cultivation world is also a dystopia), it's all planned as the twist will come. for now, even in the 160th chapter, MC Zhao Luo is still training a technique that he can use in the Outer disciple tournament but once he starts leaving the sect for missions then slowly the evil and cruelty happening around the Xin Sect will be focused on! btw think of the mc as a lucky guy who ended up in a good place but the conditions on the surrounding mountain ranges are way worse in such a way that except the northeast zone all the other zones have extremely evil cultivatorsimage
finally someone sensible. I find your arguments quite plausible and interesting BUT IDK I think the editors don't agree with you since I had entered the wfp which was on dystopia, as for the setting which followed the 'flawed' rule can be taken in a different sense since you are forgetting something. There is no such thing as utopia and THE dystopia comes from, opposite of something that is just an ideal image of society that will never exist As for a cultivation world, (RANDOM INPUT: I think that the word in which I and u live in is similar the poor strive while the extremely rich ones rule as for the just rich they are hustling to get richer) I believe till the majority is aiming for power (which most ppl do in cultivation worlds) the world (society) will stay flawed so that's my point of view except for that thanks for the wishes till now I am still waiting for readers but even if there aren't many I still have to finish what I have started!
Sin_of_GREED:Nope acc to u all japanese isekai r also dystopian đđ bro dystopian is only used when world is very similar to real one but is flawed in some ways read summary of some dystopian novels will cultivation world is totally different from our earth đ second since u merge earth or whatever u say to this world then about the rest of world second u see while ur world is world of sects in reality if such was to happen then the aristocracy would the major organization or religious type organization anyway I got more than enough knowledge from ur reply it's a cultivation novel which might have some high tech buried here and there which mc would discover who knows after hundreds of chapters well thanks for replying thou it turned out to not what I expected hope you success in ur novel
we do have laws which applies to almost all but the ultra rich/major politicians which still can't do much in bright while in cultivation world is like the tribal era strong rule and everything is about profit and loss the emotions r numb which might be due to the long age but mostly from the schemes and betrayals etc
The_Fake_God:finally someone sensible. I find your arguments quite plausible and interesting BUT IDK I think the editors don't agree with you since I had entered the wfp which was on dystopia, as for the setting which followed the 'flawed' rule can be taken in a different sense since you are forgetting something. There is no such thing as utopia and THE dystopia comes from, opposite of something that is just an ideal image of society that will never exist As for a cultivation world, (RANDOM INPUT: I think that the word in which I and u live in is similar the poor strive while the extremely rich ones rule as for the just rich they are hustling to get richer) I believe till the majority is aiming for power (which most ppl do in cultivation worlds) the world (society) will stay flawed so that's my point of view except for that thanks for the wishes till now I am still waiting for readers but even if there aren't many I still have to finish what I have started!image
yes even if ur viewers dwindle down u should atleast give it a ending As many a times a bad complete work is better than a good incomplete one for the author (my cousin's literature professor says this) it like it u leave it incomplete u will always regret and frustration not completing it which hampers the mind when a author thinks about a new story something along these lines P S( but I have to say ur book is a litte too slow paced like at 160 ch mc still has not completed the standard outer sect tournament arc)
The_Fake_God:finally someone sensible. I find your arguments quite plausible and interesting BUT IDK I think the editors don't agree with you since I had entered the wfp which was on dystopia, as for the setting which followed the 'flawed' rule can be taken in a different sense since you are forgetting something. There is no such thing as utopia and THE dystopia comes from, opposite of something that is just an ideal image of society that will never exist As for a cultivation world, (RANDOM INPUT: I think that the word in which I and u live in is similar the poor strive while the extremely rich ones rule as for the just rich they are hustling to get richer) I believe till the majority is aiming for power (which most ppl do in cultivation worlds) the world (society) will stay flawed so that's my point of view except for that thanks for the wishes till now I am still waiting for readers but even if there aren't many I still have to finish what I have started!image
yes even if ur viewers dwindle down u should atleast give it a ending As many a times a bad complete work is better than a good incomplete one for the author (my cousin's literature professor says this) it like it u leave it incomplete u will always regret and frustration not completing it which hampers the mind when a author thinks about a new story something along these lines P S( but I have to say ur book is a litte too slow paced like at 160 ch mc still has not completed the standard outer sect tournament arc)
The_Fake_God:finally someone sensible. I find your arguments quite plausible and interesting BUT IDK I think the editors don't agree with you since I had entered the wfp which was on dystopia, as for the setting which followed the 'flawed' rule can be taken in a different sense since you are forgetting something. There is no such thing as utopia and THE dystopia comes from, opposite of something that is just an ideal image of society that will never exist As for a cultivation world, (RANDOM INPUT: I think that the word in which I and u live in is similar the poor strive while the extremely rich ones rule as for the just rich they are hustling to get richer) I believe till the majority is aiming for power (which most ppl do in cultivation worlds) the world (society) will stay flawed so that's my point of view except for that thanks for the wishes till now I am still waiting for readers but even if there aren't many I still have to finish what I have started!image
(random facts: we live in a cultivation world too lol) strictly speaking, I think you already know how ppl use the loopholes in the current law and imagine having 'laws' why would a utopia even need a law...everyone would be in bliss without classes and differences...there are so many things that are wrong in our society starting from racism and like I can go on but I think it will be annoying since webnovel is a place where we come to have fun and read amazing stories... as for the cultivation world (the real eastern one), they are only cultivating one thing and that's their strength (qi cultivation, body strength cult, soul cult...etc) while where these fantasies come from I guess only the first person who wrote such amazing piece of art can tell us as for rules, (this is the final thing sorry to annoy u lol) the cultivation has more rules than us since the a the concept is the world of stronger humans who can live more than us...so to keep things in control they set rules but since you are a man of culture u must hve read this particular scene in different ways "uncle ur son has been killed by a disciple in mortal realm" "i will kill thai guy, lead me to him" "but elder you are in the ascended realm, so if u tale actions directly you will be breaking the rules" but u know how it turns out the uncle is rich and powerful he wont give a hat for the rules and go to take revenge but will for instead idk why i am using such a dumb scenario here lol thanks for the interaction
Sin_of_GREED:we do have laws which applies to almost all but the ultra rich/major politicians which still can't do much in bright while in cultivation world is like the tribal era strong rule and everything is about profit and loss the emotions r numb which might be due to the long age but mostly from the schemes and betrayals etc
yeah giving up on something you have fun doing just sucks so only if fate doesn't play me i will definitely see this to the end as for the pace, i dont know i think that building a better story is more fun than keeping it on a fast track
Sin_of_GREED:yes even if ur viewers dwindle down u should atleast give it a ending As many a times a bad complete work is better than a good incomplete one for the author (my cousin's literature professor says this) it like it u leave it incomplete u will always regret and frustration not completing it which hampers the mind when a author thinks about a new story something along these lines P S( but I have to say ur book is a litte too slow paced like at 160 ch mc still has not completed the standard outer sect tournament arc)
first of its too long second about utopia is what u say and what we do is chase after it like thou there's still many wrongs but still it's better than a hundred or two hundred years ago as for racism it will there till we encounter another sentient species either round the same lvl as us or stronger than us second this what happened after reading it all(same as ur gif)
The_Fake_God:(random facts: we live in a cultivation world too lol) strictly speaking, I think you already know how ppl use the loopholes in the current law and imagine having 'laws' why would a utopia even need a law...everyone would be in bliss without classes and differences...there are so many things that are wrong in our society starting from racism and like I can go on but I think it will be annoying since webnovel is a place where we come to have fun and read amazing stories... as for the cultivation world (the real eastern one), they are only cultivating one thing and that's their strength (qi cultivation, body strength cult, soul cult...etc) while where these fantasies come from I guess only the first person who wrote such amazing piece of art can tell us as for rules, (this is the final thing sorry to annoy u lol) the cultivation has more rules than us since the a the concept is the world of stronger humans who can live more than us...so to keep things in control they set rules but since you are a man of culture u must hve read this particular scene in different ways "uncle ur son has been killed by a disciple in mortal realm" "i will kill thai guy, lead me to him" "but elder you are in the ascended realm, so if u tale actions directly you will be breaking the rules" but u know how it turns out the uncle is rich and powerful he wont give a hat for the rules and go to take revenge but will for instead idk why i am using such a dumb scenario here lol thanks for the interactionimage
Sin_of_GREED:first of its too long second about utopia is what u say and what we do is chase after it like thou there's still many wrongs but still it's better than a hundred or two hundred years ago as for racism it will there till we encounter another sentient species either round the same lvl as us or stronger than us second this what happened after reading it all(same as ur gif)
it is better than how things were before and during WWII but who knows how much closer we can get to utopia in the next hundreds of year as for your second point, hopefully, we can end racism internally without changing targets or being ruled by some other species! (i kept it short this time hooray lol)
Sin_of_GREED:first of its too long second about utopia is what u say and what we do is chase after it like thou there's still many wrongs but still it's better than a hundred or two hundred years ago as for racism it will there till we encounter another sentient species either round the same lvl as us or stronger than us second this what happened after reading it all(same as ur gif)
The_Fake_God:it is better than how things were before and during WWII but who knows how much closer we can get to utopia in the next hundreds of year as for your second point, hopefully, we can end racism internally without changing targets or being ruled by some other species! (i kept it short this time hooray lol)