5/5 i love this story and how it was written. One of the things i love the most about the story is the unique take you make by making it first person instead of third. Because of your decison it move it to first person instead of third it really changes everything about the novel and mkes you close to the chachter becaue he is the only person you know the thoughts of. Another idea in your story i loved was how you make it like the charchter is writing the book itself saying things like ‘judgement day we would later celbreate’. things like this really make you connect to the charchters and this is what i love about your story
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