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Jester_of_God
Jester_of_GodLv32yrJester_of_God

The story took such a nose dive at chapter five and six. it’s one if not the worst and most annoying cliche plots that always get used in these types of stories, even though it completely ruins it. It was really promising but that just completely ruined it for me. it’s a dumb and incredibly un-original plot point.

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My Name Is...

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Tengu_San
Tengu_SanAuthorTengu_San

I appreciate your opinion. I know it can be a turn-off because it's overused, but that's what I visioned to happen in the story, in many sleepless night as the story unfolds in my mind as a movie. By the way, characters from early chapters will still be relevant and expanded further on in the story. Thanks anyway for giving a try.

Daoist5dpydN
Daoist5dpydNLv10Daoist5dpydN

Ahh god your review was like a breath of fresh air, the novel was interesting at the start but all of a sudden it just took a turn for the worse, I've read a lot of novels so I can recognize a cliche when I see one, but what I'm most dissatisfied with is the character of the MC, he's not unique enough more like a general outline of all those subpar heroes.

Jester_of_God
Jester_of_GodLv3Jester_of_God

It’s been two months and i can still feel the disappointment i felt while reading this. It had so much potential and it went right down the drain.

Daoist5dpydN:Ahh god your review was like a breath of fresh air, the novel was interesting at the start but all of a sudden it just took a turn for the worse, I've read a lot of novels so I can recognize a cliche when I see one, but what I'm most dissatisfied with is the character of the MC, he's not unique enough more like a general outline of all those subpar heroes.
WhiteDevil
WhiteDevilLv6WhiteDevil

can i ask what the cliche was that made u drop dis

Jester_of_God
Jester_of_GodLv3Jester_of_God

It’s the whole “oh look a random family in a forest, lets kill the father and sell the mom and kid to slave merchants. lets have some fun with the woman too.” The family which is supposed to be of decent strengh dies to a bunch of rag tag thugs and the kid runs away while doing nothing to stop or help them even tho he knowS magic and just screams about his “revenge”

WhiteDevil:can i ask what the cliche was that made u drop dis
Jester_of_God
Jester_of_GodLv3Jester_of_God

Sorry for the bad grammar

WhiteDevil:can i ask what the cliche was that made u drop dis
Beziik
BeziikLv14Beziik

Oh boy, of course we gotta give our mc a reason for revenge and get stronger in such an unsavoury way ... it's not like there's tons of ways to write a ruthless world even without raping the mc's mom ...

Jester_of_God:It’s the whole “oh look a random family in a forest, lets kill the father and sell the mom and kid to slave merchants. lets have some fun with the woman too.” The family which is supposed to be of decent strengh dies to a bunch of rag tag thugs and the kid runs away while doing nothing to stop or help them even tho he knowS magic and just screams about his “revenge”
Beziik
BeziikLv14Beziik

I'll still give it the 20 chaps grace cause I feel that's the right thing to do to better gauge the plot's vibes. Welp here we go

Beziik:Oh boy, of course we gotta give our mc a reason for revenge and get stronger in such an unsavoury way ... it's not like there's tons of ways to write a ruthless world even without raping the mc's mom ...
Jester_of_God
Jester_of_GodLv3Jester_of_God

So, how did it go?

Beziik:I'll still give it the 20 chaps grace cause I feel that's the right thing to do to better gauge the plot's vibes. Welp here we go
CharonCR
CharonCRLv12CharonCR

Yeah, how was it?

Beziik:I'll still give it the 20 chaps grace cause I feel that's the right thing to do to better gauge the plot's vibes. Welp here we go
lordbiteme3
lordbiteme3Lv14lordbiteme3

and when the world needed him most... he disappeared 😔

Beziik:I'll still give it the 20 chaps grace cause I feel that's the right thing to do to better gauge the plot's vibes. Welp here we go
TheLightAbyss
TheLightAbyssLv11TheLightAbyss

it's never coming back

Beziik:I'll still give it the 20 chaps grace cause I feel that's the right thing to do to better gauge the plot's vibes. Welp here we go
Beziik
BeziikLv14Beziik

I don't even remember what this garbage was about

TheLightAbyss:it's never coming back
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