Review Detail of Lottie_Cnozy in Sorel: The Destined Mortal 10000 B.C AGO

Hey, your fellow author here! It indeed has some typos and grammatical errors. It did make me a little confuse at some parts. Though I love the mysterious edge and the teasers worked really well to make me excited for the next chapter. The description and flow is really good. I'm excited to see how the story progresses and how the main character meets the male lead. I bet it'll be epic! OMG, I'm already fangirling rn and I haven't even gotten thru the 3 chapter. That's how good the story is, albeit the errors here and there. Some editing in the future will do wonders for the already very good story. Keep up the good work and have fun writing!