Review Detail of zeusomega in One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean

Ugh, where do I start with this joke of a fanfic? First it is borderline standards, author throws around words like "thingy" "Fock" like a high schooler is retelling his wet dream on one piece. To a certain extent this is just that, a power drive wish fulfilment. When we come looking for evil protag, it's more for their cunning and awesome schemes, not for a cliche villian trope with a plot armour. His cunning and "manipulation" starts and ends with " I shall manipulate you!" "I've read you have daddy issues in canon, now look I'll be daddy" "Ok" That's it, so what he kills your father or the person the whole village was more debited too? The plot armour kicks in and all bad outcomes are erased from possibility, no matter how low the chance of a miraculous changeover is. Author kept insisting mc acts certain way to fool people.... from the monologue of his thoughts that cover 70% each chapter you could see there's 0 difference between his crass talk outside or inside. There's so many in your face Deus ex machina that author is just teasing with his reader's bottom line. He literally goes "because...oh well :p" "He just created the system thingy" "He just blocked the thought reading thingy" "it's not hard, just have plot armour lol" There's so tension build up, no suspense ( this guy/gal blabbers everything on each and every chapter) the epitome of "tell and don't show" By the time mc did get his lightning devil fruit you'll lose all interest in what happens next. It was pretty anticlimactic too. He spoke of winning over them all instead of war but he ended up destroying the whole Island anyway.... Why? "Readers you asked and so here it is... destroyed" Not even a f**king proper explanation why a situation went from 0-100. Did all those characters including his allies with him die? If not how the fuck did they all survive the whole Island being destroyed? Even if author pulls some bunny out of his back and say oh no one died at this point I couldn't care less. That's how nonchalant and devoid of logic this crap is. The only reason I'm giving it a 3 star is because it seems to be from knowing the canon quite well, atleast from a noob who left off after time skip point of view. Basically stay away if you're looking for a serious story.