Review Detail of Majtek in The Tale of the Void Emperor
Review detail
This really started off well. Character design, world building, and all that other stuff was truly impressive. However, the more you read the less interesting it gets. MCs personality is pretty much the same as cardboard down the line. Story line devolves into a basic one too.
The Tale of the Void Emperor
LivingVoid
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how many chaps did you read? Because you are wrong. As the story goes on, MC's character finally develops into a strange one because of the influence of his power and there are major developments regarding that. As for the story....it's fast-paced but not basic. I have the future of the story, the best one, developed, and that caused me the problem of rushing it because my mind would be occupied by that, hindering my current development. But even tho i rushed, I tried my best to not make it awkward.
I am caught up with the novel. As for the MCs personality, there’s no suspense and it’s very predictable. Similar with the story line. These don’t make the novel bad, however the beginning of this work outshines the latter part of it. These are just my opinions though, I do agree that you have written something enjoyable.