Honestly, this is one of the better, if not the best, fictional+romance+action adventure stories on this platform. The world building is astounding, the same goes for character development. The way this novel is written makes me hope this story never ends!

I don’t understand this power system at all😂😭

I am caught up with the novel. As for the MCs personality, there’s no suspense and it’s very predictable. Similar with the story line. These don’t make the novel bad, however the beginning of this work outshines the latter part of it. These are just my opinions though, I do agree that you have written something enjoyable.

This really started off well. Character design, world building, and all that other stuff was truly impressive. However, the more you read the less interesting it gets. MCs personality is pretty much the same as cardboard down the line. Story line devolves into a basic one too.

You idiot. It’s the same time the grand tour game out

Y’all*

This novel has the potential to be something great. The author has the opportunity to build a fantastic world filled with many different fantasy tropes. So far, it has been an awesome ride reading up to the 200 chapters. The character building and story development are great, albeit the latter is slow at times. Overall a recommended read.

good.