Hey guys the author here. Thought I should give a quick note about this fanfic. I'd like you all to understand before reading that this is the first story I've ever truly written properly. With that, there will be errors and mistakes at times and you all need to understand that before going into read it. I'm sure there's a million better ways to do certain things however I was only ever planning on writing this as something to occupy my spare time, next thing I know im climbing the power/collection rankings and I have a decent amount of people commenting each chapter. I'm grateful for all the comments and reviews so far and do take criticism to heart in order to improve myself but if you expect perfection, go read another novel. Some great novels HP novels I can recommend are The rise of the protector and I'm Voldemort. Thanks! :)
BoiGeorge
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LIKEHaha no worries man. Even though it was harsh in areas it was still criticism and something I need to learn from. Hope you find another good novel to read!
lok_98:If what u r saying is true,then sorry for my comments đ
BoiGeorge:Haha no worries man. Even though it was harsh in areas it was still criticism and something I need to learn from. Hope you find another good novel to read!
CountWatermelonTM:I think you just droped your ff down to a 4.3 instead of a 5
the poeple here at webnovel you will find are mostly nice people we understand the position you are in and we accept it you do this as an extra thing and to help your writing improve and that is respect worthy you get all this attention for your amazing writing and yet you keep true to the reason you are doing this. people like you are 1 in a million that means there are only 7792 in the entire world similar to you and that alone is amazing.
I abso-fuckin-lutely love your novel dude , please keep up , it's like a breeze of fresh air , at last , someone remembered that merlin is the No.1 wizard in all myths , comics , novels etc ... your portray of your main character made me absolutely đŻ love , great novel , man , keep up , you are doing absolutely marvelous.
You know i hate the whole 5 star ratings every novel gets since it doesnt reflect the true value of the novel anymore, only the amount of review spammers. I can respect giving yourself 1 star. I havent read the novel yet but i will at least see what it has to offer. As for your recommendations of The Protector etc., i have read them and they were horrible so no thank you.
the book thing with the Lovegoods was really unrealistic. who gives so many books for free and just the first year books which there are 8 cost about 10 galleons each so 80 galleons and thats about 400 uk pounds. and if he got every book for the 7 years (atleast 8 books per year) thats 56 books 560 galleons (2800 uk pounds) (1 galleon = 5 uk pounds)
Yes I completely agree with you. It was one of the plot points i made when looking back now I strongly disagree with. Theres been so many times I wanted to even rewrite the entire first volume however it'd ruin continuity if I did. However while it does leave holes and such I like to look back on where I came from. My recent chapters im proud of but still look to improve however looking back at when I started, I feel the improvement is stark and its nice to see. But again, I do agree its unrealistic. I just wanted a plot device that allowed Oz to get his hands on 'magic' earlier than normal and I'll admit that.
Shuten:the book thing with the Lovegoods was really unrealistic. who gives so many books for free and just the first year books which there are 8 cost about 10 galleons each so 80 galleons and thats about 400 uk pounds. and if he got every book for the 7 years (atleast 8 books per year) thats 56 books 560 galleons (2800 uk pounds) (1 galleon = 5 uk pounds)
will continue to read. and this would have been cool look for Mc or young looking merlin Fate grand order Merlin
BoiGeorge:Yes I completely agree with you. It was one of the plot points i made when looking back now I strongly disagree with. Theres been so many times I wanted to even rewrite the entire first volume however it'd ruin continuity if I did. However while it does leave holes and such I like to look back on where I came from. My recent chapters im proud of but still look to improve however looking back at when I started, I feel the improvement is stark and its nice to see. But again, I do agree its unrealistic. I just wanted a plot device that allowed Oz to get his hands on 'magic' earlier than normal and I'll admit that.