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Here's some notes. Narrator voice shouldn't be used to comment on things that are observations or opinions. Things like how perfect/flawed a characters attire is are better left for a character to observe. The word choice is a little verbose here. Try to stay within two descriptive adjectives in your character descriptions. Optimally the reader should be able to imagine a character. Let details like color and shape be your first visual. This will help you choose your words in a more effective way. Good luck, hope this helps.
Yumi written in a different way can mean moon as well.
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Infinite Moon Moon?
tiger mouth
It's named after one. Sauce please.
heath > heat
identity sound be Identity
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It's not a good look when you're making mistakes in the first sentence of the novel.
much worst hahaha
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Real USA politics in Magical Britain, got it.
stuck -> struck
this should be cased correctly
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