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Weirdo
WeirdoLv63yrWeirdo

Overall, an average fanfiction. Nice concept where he could punch out attribute whenever he punch someone, kind of like picking attribute novel.. And sadly, he didn't use his Canon knowledge much, dunno why....

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Exploding Attribute System In Douluo Dalu

DivinDragonEmperor

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PhamtomofThenight
PhamtomofThenightLv10PhamtomofThenight

can you tell me the original name of this novel before you translate or you can just send me the link?

DivinDragonEmperor
DivinDragonEmperorAuthorDivinDragonEmperor

Bruh, how can you use canon knowledge when you barely have power? The guy's born without backing, what's he going to do, curry favor with a useless bum like grandmaster? His system will increase his strength faster than staying with grandmaster. Anyway, thanks for the review.

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

No, what I mean is... First, he could have learn TangSan martial art so he could train faster.. Be the kids who want to be better like how he act, fighting everyday. But after the fight, follow TangSan and ask him to teach. TangSan will teach, just look at Canon.. Join his sect, he will teach. He got 3 years to ask TangSan how he got so strong, teach him etc... Then, grandmaster encounter. Why did he leave when he could stay? Grandmaster may reveal or hint that he got dual martial spirit and he could also reveal his staff spirit, letting grandmaster know he's dual spirit. Just look at him, having a strong body, stronger than normal rank4 body. He literally proof grandmaster theory, and I bet grandmaster will be interested. Dual spirit, stronger body, strong will, not dumb normal kid, same village with TangSan, grandmaster will definitely also accept him. But no, he just have to go away and leave out his only chance to impress grandmaster face to face. Such pity, don't you think so? Theres a few more minor point I wouldn't spell out... The two above is the one that is so glaringly obvious that mc quite dumb to take chance. I'm normal guy, and I still know that becoming TangSan bro is better than shouting "Fight me!!!" everyday and lose...

DivinDragonEmperor:Bruh, how can you use canon knowledge when you barely have power? The guy's born without backing, what's he going to do, curry favor with a useless bum like grandmaster? His system will increase his strength faster than staying with grandmaster. Anyway, thanks for the review.
Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

I know system will give him massive boost, it's easy math.. But if he learn something from TangSan or even take grandmaster as his teacher, none of it will be a loss.. Instead, he could be stronger in shorter time...

DivinDragonEmperor:Bruh, how can you use canon knowledge when you barely have power? The guy's born without backing, what's he going to do, curry favor with a useless bum like grandmaster? His system will increase his strength faster than staying with grandmaster. Anyway, thanks for the review.
DivinDragonEmperor
DivinDragonEmperorAuthorDivinDragonEmperor

He can't learn Tang San's martial art. I think this was in the 2nd or third chapter after the mc had obtained Ghost Perplexing Track, most Tang Sect techniques are powered by the cultivation technique of the tang sect. the mc can't up and go to tang san and say give me your cultivation technique and other methods like jade hands etc. at that time, its more likely tang san kills him to hide his secret of being a reincarnator. So although your proposition sounds nice, its not practical, particularly in a cultivation world where even children can kill. This ain't anime bro. lol

Weirdo:No, what I mean is... First, he could have learn TangSan martial art so he could train faster.. Be the kids who want to be better like how he act, fighting everyday. But after the fight, follow TangSan and ask him to teach. TangSan will teach, just look at Canon.. Join his sect, he will teach. He got 3 years to ask TangSan how he got so strong, teach him etc... Then, grandmaster encounter. Why did he leave when he could stay? Grandmaster may reveal or hint that he got dual martial spirit and he could also reveal his staff spirit, letting grandmaster know he's dual spirit. Just look at him, having a strong body, stronger than normal rank4 body. He literally proof grandmaster theory, and I bet grandmaster will be interested. Dual spirit, stronger body, strong will, not dumb normal kid, same village with TangSan, grandmaster will definitely also accept him. But no, he just have to go away and leave out his only chance to impress grandmaster face to face. Such pity, don't you think so? Theres a few more minor point I wouldn't spell out... The two above is the one that is so glaringly obvious that mc quite dumb to take chance. I'm normal guy, and I still know that becoming TangSan bro is better than shouting "Fight me!!!" everyday and lose...
Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Don't reply at me bro... Reply at the author comment.. That will let him notice it...

PhamtomofThenight:can you tell me the original name of this novel before you translate or you can just send me the link?
DivinDragonEmperor
DivinDragonEmperorAuthorDivinDragonEmperor

why? you want to read the MTL of this novel?

Weirdo:Don't reply at me bro... Reply at the author comment.. That will let him notice it...
salamander0
salamander0Lv13salamander0

can you write it in English so that I can go to chrome to translate it to English and can you write it like Webnovel. com

DivinDragonEmperor:why? you want to read the MTL of this novel?
DivinDragonEmperor
DivinDragonEmperorAuthorDivinDragonEmperor

I do write it in english. What's the issue? Is the translation bad or is there grammar mistakes?

salamander0:can you write it in English so that I can go to chrome to translate it to English and can you write it like Webnovel. com
salamander0
salamander0Lv13salamander0

no problem it just that I already read it up to 200

DivinDragonEmperor:I do write it in english. What's the issue? Is the translation bad or is there grammar mistakes?
DivinDragonEmperor
DivinDragonEmperorAuthorDivinDragonEmperor

I read to 100. BUt I've paused, I want to translate all the chapters till 100 or close before carrying on reading.

salamander0:no problem it just that I already read it up to 200
salamander0
salamander0Lv13salamander0

you have write this novel in another app right like this one

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Don't reply at me. Reply at author comment, I am not the author.. Lol...

salamander0:you have write this novel in another app right like this one
Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Reply at the guy who ask you, not me...

DivinDragonEmperor:why? you want to read the MTL of this novel?
salamander0
salamander0Lv13salamander0

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DivinDragonEmperor
DivinDragonEmperorAuthorDivinDragonEmperor

I did.

Weirdo:Reply at the guy who ask you, not me...
Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Then why you tag on my comment too? Lol...

DivinDragonEmperor:I did.
DivinDragonEmperor
DivinDragonEmperorAuthorDivinDragonEmperor

I replied to him. Did I tag you? Sorry, it was a mistake if I did

Weirdo:Then why you tag on my comment too? Lol...
Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Ahh, good..

DivinDragonEmperor:I replied to him. Did I tag you? Sorry, it was a mistake if I did
Eom
EomLv4Eom

" Douluo Dalu: Attacking to Loot Attribute " you can write this on search bar in mtl or google

PhamtomofThenight:can you tell me the original name of this novel before you translate or you can just send me the link?