Review Detail of Clockhours in Sourabha Rajyam - The Land Where Women Don't Matter

This is my first time reading a story based on India. I like the way you set up the world by mixing the culture and history. Overall, the characters are great and the story is solid. There are few things which I feel should be looked into. There is an excessive use of description. I totally agree with the world building description but when describing the characters it would have been better if you did it by mixing dialogues in midst of it. The mission part, where the head was briefing them, I kind of felt as the team members are amateurs going to a mission of national importance. I mean, come on, those who are selected for these types of mission are given atleast basic training before being sent to their mission. All the instructions given by the head would have been more interesting if they showed it through their actions or when they are in a situation and remembers the word of their head. Otherwise this novel is a pleasure to read.