Review Detail of Wolfgirl1215 in Royalty

Ooh, lovely work author. Firstly, the character design and plot are both fantastic, something that really shines in this novel is the uniqueness of the plot as well as how much detail is put into every characters personality and background. It really helps them come to life! While I really enjoyed the quality of writing- it has a nice colloquial style to it- I would say the flow of the story needs to be worked on, as sometimes it felt a bit cut and paste. And a minor thing, but when reading, there were a few times when something was thought by the character that didn't fit the narration, so made it a big jarring. But overall, great work. If you like royalty, fantasy and drama, this is for you!