Review Detail of Insane_Pumpkin in I Reincarnated In G.I Joe

Item: I Reincarnated In G.I Joe
Rating: 2

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Insane_PumpkinLv52yrInsane_Pumpkin

Good, idea, decent ploot but the grammar is tragic. If it was misspeled words or problems with he, she, it etc... then it would be ok but this fanfic here lacks entire words from the sentences...

I Reincarnated In G.I Joe

Just_for_fun1997

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MentalLv2Mental

"I am writing this for fun and to pass time also English is not first language so the writing quality is going to suck"

2yr

IWant2DieALilMoreLv14IWant2DieALilMore

True, but what other G.I joe fanfic have you seen?? even fanfiction/com has no long(word count wise) stories.

2yr

Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

Mental:"I am writing this for fun and to pass time also English is not first language so the writing quality is going to suck"

2yr