Review Detail of Madyan_wani in F8: THE INFINITE TOUR SERIES

Item: F8: THE INFINITE TOUR SERIES
Rating: 5

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Madyan_waniLv103yrMadyan_wani

Your story is really cliche. But a little bit advice that if you want to hook readers you must make your chapter lengthy. Your background and specification of characters are really nice but try to introduce them one by one as story unfolds. But overall a great story. Keep it up

F8: THE INFINITE TOUR SERIES

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CAMIL_AuthorCAMIL_

As you continue readingthe story, you will see some information and background from where the Characters came from and why they are they way they are today, but ill keep in mind about the chapters length. Thank you for the Advice!

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