I love how the author described the characters, the bacKground and the story in general. i love how it has hints Comedy i like to see that. if your into these type of storys i highly recommend

I love how the author describes and have into the details of the characters, background and the story in general. If you are into these type of story’s I highly recommend this one

I love how the author made this! With the diary and the thoughts that the charcter is going through and everything else. the sypnosis is also catchy it could grab readers making people want to read this “diary”. all i could say at the end is that this could improve a little bit but i beleive this will make a Hit! Good luck!

I love how in the sypnosis you can see In mind where this story can lead and it leaves you imagining what could happen next which brings you into this story i find interesting. i love how you add a little but of romance and action/humor combined in it as well. keep it up!

When i first read the sypnosis i knew this story was going to be interesting. I love how you Described Your characters with a strong lead and the cover if the story. Its really interesting, i recommend it. good job

As you continue readingthe story, you will see some information and background from where the Characters came from and why they are they way they are today, but ill keep in mind about the chapters length. Thank you for the Advice!

I have to say just by reading the first chapter you can tell author seems dedicated to what he is doing and adding enough details as he can to the story and i really like that. Even though there were some words i didnt know i still find the story interesting, keep it up! :)

Overall right when i read the sypnosis i knew that this was going to be interesting, i love how you add a little hint if humor from time to time, i also lovee everything about the princess. I enjoyed reading, i cant wait to see more :)

The development, the description if the characters, and the background Of Everyone and everything thats going is On point! If i was to be honest i didnt think this was going to intrest me as i thought it would but the first chapter got me hooked, keep it going!

To me I like how in the beginning, the story made me want to question what is going on and makes me feel as if i want to know more (I think that’s a good thing) The characters are also interesting and how you described them. But so far it looks really good :)

I love how at first glance on the sypnosis and so on, i was really interested on how and where the characters came from and it made me want to read more, im willing to see more :)

Wow i have to say, this cuaght my eye. i beleive it was the way you used your words and how you described the background of everything (world background) i reccomend this a lot. keep it up!

When i first Saw the sypnosis i thought this might be something Totally different but it ended up being somthing i enjoyed. though the characters background were a little fast paced i still beleive the story was enjoyable. keep it up! :)

Even though there are some grammatical erros, im ahre yoy can fix them along the wat. I Also like how the story Starts to build up over time and how the authors description of the charcters were new and Unique and the art of the cover as well. keep it up, your doing great! :)

I love how you described the characters and how they were going through such. Im also into these kindve themes, its nice to see one just like it! And even when i read the Summary i knew it was going to be good, keep it up :)

I Recommend this being out there for people to see, the story so far is good once you start to Picture the details in mind. Keep going with the updates, You got this

As i said before I find this one interesting mainly when you start to picture the details in mind. This is a story i recommend this being out there for people to see, keep the updates going, you got this :)

I love how you Described this World of fantasy and What the charcters were going through and overall the legacy behind it all, i enjoyed it and i cant wait to see what you got next, Keep going

I really enjoyed how much details you put in the Characters not just that but also the story as well, i was really into it in the first few chapters, I enjoyed it, it kept me going wanting to know what happens next. it looks good, keep going.

As far as everything else im actully into it and im not really into such things as this but it cuaght my eye and how much detailed was put into it, I like to see where this can go, keep it up :)