Review Detail of ShadowFlux1909 in Op Girl with Touhou System

The story is good, so is the mc, and its also a touhou fic. But the main big issue, is the grammar, there are soo many errors im almost certain this is a MTL fic, since the author didnt bother to fix the errors even in the later chapters. Untill the author fixes this error it wont get more than 2-3 stars from me. I suggest grammarly, its pretty easy to use.