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This is a good novel to expect for a new one. Mine is really bad in my first drafts and edits XD. So far, I've been interested how the mc will cope up with her life considering her health problems. And will read further to know more. The only thing that bothers me is some long paragraphs that almost covered the whole page though it's a personal preference. I tend to read novels with shorter ones. Over all, the author is doing a good job! Keep it up author! I'll wait for the releases of future chapters! If you want to see an improvement of my novel for reference in grammar and everything, see the difference of quality between my two novels. (If you just want though and the other one is over a year old so don't mind the views despite the low quality)