Review Detail of eccentricbeing18 in In the Naruto world

Well, everything was great until the danzo shit. It was all down hill from there. If you want to share your emo shit life to the point of destroying the story then go nuts. Just don't expect people to like your novel especially when you ruined the first chapter by your weak ass backstory just to share your personal insecurities. And seriously DANCE?? REALLY???