Against the Dothraki that come on ships ? buddy, you haven't been playing attention 😂

ehmm, they already met Last chapter lol

I mean, it is a fanfic, so like 99% of them, they are very unrealistic, and the same happens here as well. Like I said, the author can write whatever he wants and bullshit his way through anything because he is well within his rights, but I feel weirded out when reading this. It just feels wrong. That said, good luck writing this, but this story needs some test readers before you post chapters. Good day :D

Correct me If I am wrong, and this may has been stated in the earlier chapters but you as well as I know that they were released quite a while ago, so I may have forgotten some things already. Isn't 10 the max? So If he has 20 Trick which is way beyond what one should be able to...is it because of this that he has the storing Ability If you say it is because of his Trick? Or ist ist just mandetory to get it at higher levels. I mean his mom is 9.3 I Think and John is 7.5 and can't do this. And wel....considering that she was unable to protect her children.....yeah

I have a question.....is the storing Ability only something that he has or his mother and her family as well?Because it is something that isn't canon

Well, he should be able to copy her Ability as his Level is higher, but he is powerful enough either way.

There is nothing wrong with it, but the problem is those type of stories never can and never will be enjoyable because Ai will make every Chapter mor or less the same. Same writing style, same words and characters will feel less like characters. ;(

100%. An AI, like Chatgpt, always uses the same words to describe things. If words like " sprawling," " a mix of," " a testament, " etc, are there every time something is described....you know it is chatgpt. Also, the constant jumping from place to place is a big indicator. If that isn't enough, there are programs like Chatgpt, but there are other programs to identify if certain texts are made by Ai and I did it and guess what? :D

well, it is a copy paste from chatgpt so yeah.....

Heho, good to see you back;).

Chatgpt is powerful in this one ;)

I mean, you told me more or less that I am correct, so.......

you believe what you believe bro

my Lord?

Not going to lie, but you either need to change his House, change his character, or rewrite the synopsis because Hufflepuff and schemer make zero sense. Also, if he is so super talented and obsessed with magic (I don't know because I haven't read it, but it sounds like it in the synopsis), then he needs to be in either Ravenclaw or Slytherin.

It sounds like it was written by an AI, which it probably was, and it doesn't have any depth to it. The character confuses me to no end because he changes his mood more than women change their clothes, and he's apparently ready to talk about what he can do. But in the end, he can't, because, like I said, it was probably written by the AI. And there are like 15 chapters in 5 months so there's that!

is this still beeing Updated or abonded?

good thing he got stronger because a "natural" liger isn't really that strong. he weigths a lot more than a tiger or lion and this is burden itself. ;)

I don't understand the hype around this novel, but considering it seems to appeal mostly to younger readers who are illiterate...I understand it. The story is rife with clichés, except for the part where his sister doesn't suddenly gain an extraordinary talent around chapter 20, which is somewhat unexpected because this Novel could be renamed to RE: Cliche. However, the rest involves the author contriving reasons for other characters to be stronger than the main character (MC), seemingly to prevent the MC from becoming too powerful. The concept of time in the story is also poorly handled. For instance, in the early chapters, he was supposed to meet a woman named Alex at noon. She comments that it's not nearly noon and questions why he's there, but then, within two minutes, it suddenly is noon. The lack of attention to detail is insane. Written by a kid it seems. Additionally, the story falls into the trap of claiming that leveling up isn't as important as other tasks, yet randomly, characters who have focused on leveling up all along end up being more powerful than him, which feels like a weak excuse for a plot. This novel is disappointing overall.

Go to sleep, kid. you obviously haven't read the original Story.