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Review Detail of ReaderFromRoblox in Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor

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ReaderFromRoblox
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I've only read 5 chapters and I already decided it was not for me. I read a lot of other reviews stating that the writing is good and there are no flaws. Some say that the writing is the worst part of the novel and I agree with that. It's horrendous, I could not go on 1 chapter without reading a sentence that has "you know" in it. It ruins the immersion and just kind of breaks the story for me. Also, the first 5 chapters are legit just exposition dumps and it ruins the world-building because who the hell is going to remember all that information? Overall, what threw me off is the horrendous writing. I heard the story is pretty good but I can't read a good story if the writing is so bad.

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Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor

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