I am a very picky reader. I hate MC's who are not ruthless enough with a hero complex . Such heroes most often tend to be idiots/ simps . Hence , this novel provided me with a refreshing take on the usually bland MC genre. The MC in this novel is ruthless to his enemies yet loving to his family members. He most often keeps a cool head and does not rush into fights that he know he can't win . He keeps his calm and then dishes out revenge in the most satisfying way possible. He is not a hypocrite and is not aversive to killing for achieving his objective. The writing quality is excellent without much grammatical errors. His power progression is well paced ( does not make you feel bored) . The only suggestion that I have is to include the other girl as his wife as well ( since she bears the child of the MC ) . Eventhough MC had no direct physical role in the conception of the child, he should take responsibility . Moreover the attitude of the girl seems to be good and seems to care for the well being of the MC. Also, I would like the author to explain the stages beyond celestial stage. It seems confusing. We don't have an idea regarding the power levels of his enemies beyond the immortal stage . It seems vague. Also a little bit of kingdom building will do good to the novel. Let the common people understand that the MC is not heartless as his enemies seem to project.
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