Review Detail of Protagonist_M in City of Vengeance

Now this....this is a true breath of fresh air. I admit that as I slog through these endless stories plagued with writing I would be generous to call amateur, I have developed a certain preconception regarding the quality of stories available on this website. But this? This has truly humbled me. The writing is easily several leagues above most of the popular power fantasies that litter this site. The atmosphere and emotion depicted is crisp and to the point. Honestly, I would put the quality of writing over even most published paper-back young adult fiction. The transition to Henry Ortega's encounter with the apologetic killer was amazing. The closing paragraph of the prologue leaved me wanting more. Phenomenal work.