Love it! Cool story, good writing. Some minor spelling mistakes here and there (like too instead of to), but as the sentences are properly structured, they don’t impair the reading experience.
vVip3rzzz
Liked it!
LIKEBtw, you can always try Grammarly or something similar. There’s a free option for it and it honestly is pretty useful 😉
vVip3rzzz:Is that still a problem in the lator chapters? Also thanks for the review :)
I use it, if there are some consistent mistakes past then its probably either a massive **** up on my part, or that Australian English spells certain witds different.
SaraAnn:Btw, you can always try Grammarly or something similar. There’s a free option for it and it honestly is pretty useful 😉