Review Detail of Vegardmk in Ascension of the Immortal Asura
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Review till chapter 203 Story is fine. Mc is fine. Story progresses fine. The problem with this novel is actually not the story itself but the cultivation. In this world you can either cultivate body or qi essence. The mc is unique and have 2 dantians, which makes him capable of cultivating both. The problem is that we often se mc fighting those at one minor realm over himself.(like early vs middle of a major realm) Till chapter 203, everytime that have happened mc has a really tight battle and the explains how great this is. The problem I have with this is that in almost every novel, the mc surprises everyone with his skill, and manages to defeat those at higher realms while being at a lower cultivation level. In this world supposedly body cultivating is a path which is as attractive as cultivating qi. Now we come to the roots of the problem. For example in chapter 200 we have a fight where opponent is a minor realm above his qi and body cultivation. MC has better qi skills, domain and so on. Still he only manages to win slightly. And then author talks of how he is genius to do this. To be honest, I feel like is a wastly underwhelming. I must say that it doesnt feel like he has a double cultivation at all. In none of the fights. Why bother going about this double dantian if it isnt gonna matter in fights. Why talk so much about body cultivations techniqiue if it doesnt seem like it helps. Authoer should read the book Walker of the worlds to see how it realisticially should have been. It is just annoying to read tbh, and makes the reading less realistic, and I wonder how it is gonna be when mc is gonna meet body cultivators later, when we see how underwhelming it has been till now.
Ascension of the Immortal Asura
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I must say, that this was bad review. But the problem still stands. Why does it seem like he is way below them in cultivation when he is only a minor realm and he cultivates both. It defeats the purpose. And what about the heavendefying tecnique(body). It is wastly underwhelming and when you go out you should expect more. I think auther should reevaluate, and if it becomes too complex just have 1 dantian, because making it seem like he has 1 dantian while he has 2 is just annoying. What is the point if the only can fight one minor realm if he has 2 dantians of that, which supposedly doubles his power. Just stupid, and a plothole which has continued to grow till chapter 200.
yeah, but to be honest, this seems more like a nitpick, then an actual problem with the story, it's just that you're used to something like I shall seal the heavens, or other, but yeah, I get it!
rRandom:The MC gets a very big power boost just a few chapters later (230ish or so), which allows him to jump many more minor realms, which addresses your main concern.
I think the whole point of the original reviewer is that he shouldn't need a separate boost to fight above levels. Being able to cultivate both body and qi should, at the very least, allow him to be at the top of his major realm as soon as he gets there
rRandom:The MC gets a very big power boost just a few chapters later (230ish or so), which allows him to jump many more minor realms, which addresses your main concern.
Think of it as this way. John having two systems (body + essence) is additive. Its like fighting two against one, and he has an advantage against someone in the same realm as him. For a real world example, its like two children fighting against one. The two will always win, until an adult shows up, and then numbers don't matter. John's two cultivation system alone doesn't allow him to jump to adult level just yet. He needs to level up both of those systems to be stronger in order to jump realms (which he does a bit later on). Thats why right now he's invincible in the same realm, but cannot jump too high.
sblego11:I think the whole point of the original reviewer is that he shouldn't need a separate boost to fight above levels. Being able to cultivate both body and qi should, at the very least, allow him to be at the top of his major realm as soon as he gets there
Well author, your forgot the "heaven defying technique" part. It should be 2 adults facing one child...this is more convincing and realistic. 2 for dantian/power system and adults for those "technique".
rRandom:Think of it as this way. John having two systems (body + essence) is additive. Its like fighting two against one, and he has an advantage against someone in the same realm as him. For a real world example, its like two children fighting against one. The two will always win, until an adult shows up, and then numbers don't matter. John's two cultivation system alone doesn't allow him to jump to adult level just yet. He needs to level up both of those systems to be stronger in order to jump realms (which he does a bit later on). Thats why right now he's invincible in the same realm, but cannot jump too high.
