Review Detail of Psan in The Irregulars Journey.
Review detail
I really enjoyed the whole thing. Many are angry that mc is allowing nie lie to take the same objects and rewards he got the last time abd that he is his dog.... thats BS. Tatsuya and Miyuki made their own progress and find their own heavely treasures, the treasures linked to nie lie sre tied to his destiny to become stronger, and taking those out is nerfing tatsuya and miyuki best ally and friend. There is nothing wrong with leaving stuff for your allies. A good example would be the nightmare pot to fuse spirits... does it matters if nie lie has it if both also get the benefits? Shadow spirit... none of them can use it then why are they upset that nie lie took it? Ridiculous xd.... meeting the fire goddess.... taatsuya left the laws and the blacksrping for nie lie to loot as adviced by the system, which is the pivot point of nie lie getting the laws he need while tatsuya gets the goddess.... fair traide xd. Now... the grammar is 8-9/10. Story line is better thsn the OG and i like that tatsuya and miyuki powered up glory city A LOT, a thing that nie lie never did as much as he should. Only thing, i would like more world baclground, explanations, more details in characters and surroundings descriptions. So far to understand this FF you must have read the OG. And this puts new readers in a hard spot. So pls make it so that they understand as i have no doubt.... everyone iz here for Oni-sama! And miyuki
The Irregulars Journey.
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it's true, that's very annoying. But new authors tend to do that because they lack enough experience. They are only starting so it's understandable I guess? As long as it will not be like this till the end, that is.
Spelloyal:The problem is not the MC helping Nie Li, but the chapters that are entirely copied from the original novel. Unnecessary things like the nie li alchemist test are copied and pasted into this fanfic. It gets to the point where it is better to just read TDG again instead of this fanfic.
new fanfic authors tend to follow the plot or write op mc novels filled with plot holes. These I don't care to read and give my opinion to help the author to improve as long as they are not too bad to the point of being boring and tiring. This is the first time that I see someone copy and paste so much content from the riginal novel and stay in the protagonist of the original novel instead of the mc of the fanfic. However, it is worth mentioning that the author said that he fixed this in later chapters and the novel no longer focuses on nie lie, but I don't know if it's true because I haven't read it.
Fishball_22:it's true, that's very annoying. But new authors tend to do that because they lack enough experience. They are only starting so it's understandable I guess? As long as it will not be like this till the end, that is.
