Review Detail of AdeCS in My Hermes System

The novel is good, well written, the character development is interesting and overall it's a good novel. But if there's a taunting thing about this novel it's that it's full of jargon, that's the bad thing. Every interaction between the protagonist and another character has to have a jargon, and the worst thing is when this happens in the middle of fights, the characters are attacking each other, then they stop to say they're going to kill themselves, they go back to attacking and stop again to drop other jargon and it's like that throughout the fight, it seems like interactions of children who are playing superheroes. The fight that was supposed to be frantic, one wanting to kill the other and leaving no chance for the rival to breathe, but no, it's 1 attack and a jargon, another attack and another jargon. I recommend the novel, but you'll have to get used to it.