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Review Detail of Romeru in My Hermes System

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Romeru
RomeruAuthor3yrRomeru

Hello, poor author here. I would just like to point out the things to expect from this book: The Good: 1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom. 2. I am your friend. The Bad: 1. Expect me to make grammar mistakes. I mostly mix up my gender pronouns since they don't exist in my language. 2. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow. 3. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together. 4. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together. 5. Damaged MC - Some of you might not like it. Our MC is a survivor of child abuse, so do expect some moments of weakness and irrationality. Just hints and pieces. 6. Character first, System second - Although this is a System book, I tend to focus more on the characters. 7. Inconsitencies - It's a book about a speedster, so there might be inconsistencies here and there. But I will try my best to avoid it. Here's what to do before reading this book: 1. Play some music. 2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first. 3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I can do when someone can breathe fire from their nose. 4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book :( Got this from Kota btw. Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)

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My Hermes System

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LooLEmperor
LooLEmperorLv2LooLEmperor

sussy

Knights_Errant
Knights_ErrantLv3Knights_Errant

Haha agreed when the author is writing fantasy and readers pull up e=mcÂČ to explain how the fireball is bullshet as if we don't already know.

Tmii
TmiiLv13Tmii

So this has no r-18 lame i guess ill just wait for chaps for your other novel which Is bEtter

Jack_Wilder
Jack_WilderLv3Jack_Wilder

now not to be mean but is number 2 a truly good thing. I'm just kidding this is a joke.

MonoNautilus
MonoNautilusLv4MonoNautilus

gonna give it a try just because of this review

teslord
teslordLv4teslord

just don't make the mc a wimpy cuck that's all.

OnePun
OnePunLv6OnePun

Keep it slow... realistic.... as down to earth as possible... cause it is a speed star. You can't give him enlightenment in the first volume cause that will make him surpass mach level speed.

LogMetro
LogMetroLv15LogMetro

....How’d he know i was on the toilet?

Romeru
RomeruAuthorRomeru

LogMetro:....How’d he know i was on the toilet?
EternaLoli
EternaLoliLv4EternaLoli

I like this men Respect +

NotSoBigShlong
NotSoBigShlongLv13NotSoBigShlong

Phenomenon_Empire
Phenomenon_EmpireLv3Phenomenon_Empire

nice story kinda unique is Andrea gay?

Lu_Ck
Lu_CkLv13Lu_Ck

Is this an harem plz tell me it's not

Slimypolarbear
SlimypolarbearLv11Slimypolarbear

Really nice break from when only one person in the eirld has a system

WeebNeet
WeebNeetLv4WeebNeet

exp

Nickegen
NickegenLv3Nickegen

cool it sounds like a good book

AnubisRat
AnubisRatLv15AnubisRat

I don't mind errors unless every other word is wrong. Everyone makes mistakes, so no harm there. Just keep practicing and enjoy the ride of writing. I'm loving the book as I've said. And, I really do not think that will change.

Frengky_4926
Frengky_4926Lv1Frengky_4926

oogffvok Kii

DaoistoD04IR
DaoistoD04IRLv3DaoistoD04IR

Yay a new friend!

FacelessMask
FacelessMaskLv10FacelessMask

hey author I just wanted to make sure that there's no romance or harem in this right?

Sangrith_M_7008
Sangrith_M_7008Lv10Sangrith_M_7008

WTF (O_o)?? MC is not leveling up with crystal or using lucky soul for EXP? đŸ˜©