Review Detail of GnawingJackal in Transmigration in Against the Gods (AU)

The feel of the dialogue in the story meshes with the writing as it was in ATG, so that's well done. The problem with the story is that the MC is too laid back for a cultivation novel, and though this makes him more level-headed and likable than Yun Che, Cultivation stories thrive on conflict. The Main character NEEDS to overcome great difficulties! Without random a**holes constantly antagonizing the MC the story isn't compelling unless you throw a lot of Slice of Life magical BS to explain the MC's cultivating process and the problems he needs to solve to progress. This story hand-waves all of the difficulties the MC has when he's cultivating away into the background. As a result the MC of the story is a level-headed OP bad-ass with no enemies that nevertheless conveniently powers up all the time. No conflict. No wow