Review Detail of Charan56 in Transmigration in Against the Gods (AU)

author, you're doing a good job writing an ATG fanfic. I have some suggestions, if you think they are useful, then it's good. 1) The dialogues are stretched in my opinion. The conversations are long and a little boring. Like, I lose interest and I feel the dialogues of the characters you have written are not at all genuine. If you go through OG and recheck it, you find they are completely not what they used to be. 2) I really appreciate that you are taking it slow, you need a lot of patience to write each and every part, while the pace is slow and many are okay with it. But, It would be better if you cut some useless/ extra information that doesn't let the plot progress. Because readers tend to lose interest pretty quickly. 3) MC is more or less following what YC did in OG, but a little different. If it gets deviated a bit more, it would be a lot better. 4)Grammar is good but some words get on repeating. 'dumbfounded', 'smile', 'faint smile',... 5) Update schedule is definitely great and It would be better if the author writes each chapter taking a bit more time. Surely, you get to edit and the final draft would be more appealing to read. 6)That's all, this is what I felt after reading your fanfic. And once again thanks author for writing this fanfic.