Review Detail of Entrail_JI in Ember's Crown

Writing quality : The writing quality is absolutely superb. Poetic and fluent in every way. Stability of updates : mh...It seems like there is a 5-month gap between the last post and the newest post. But seeing that author is starting to pick up the story I will leave it to the benefit of the doubt and still give it a 5 star. Hopefully you continue writing this story and update it regularly cus you have my collection. Story development : Only 8 chapters so I can't really comment to much with regards to this, but so far it is impeccable. Character design : Even though there are only 8 chapters, you can't put anything below 5 stars as each character is well throughout and the author does a magnificent job at depicting their character well. World background : Same as before. There are only 8 chapters and thus not much to work with. But so far, I would say it is going in the right direction. 5 star through and through Extra thoughts : The author uses ' for dialogues, which is not wrong, it's just that it can be confusing since most authors on this platform use ". Most of the time ' would be used for internal monologues. This is just my personal opinion so you don't really have to follow through with this. anyhow this story, accompanied by its impeccable grammar, has A LOT of potentials. All it needs is a constant update schedule and the author can find himself with a gem.