Review Detail of GetDaDraws in Revenge is always sweet

So far this feels like a story about a middle schooler wish fulfillment written by a middle schooler. I know and understand yes hentai logic but hentai logic can only go so far till you might wonder if your reading a parody of a story or a actual story. I wouldn't mind giving a more in depth description of what I didn't like but nope the author didn't seem to care so I don't either. Just know that its bad Character descriptions are a -. So bad it's "Female Name" was a bully has under developed bre@$t but also large. And has blonde hair Personality is a - I've been bullied. She bullied me. World Building is a - Japan...with I think American names mixed in Smut is a -....its not good...its short... Grammer is a - so many mistakes almost every paragraph has something wrong. Like it was translated with google translator. Plot - no real plot, goals, progression, and not like one shots