Review Detail of Xeoz in Revenge is always sweet

Item: Revenge is always sweet
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

XeozLv103yrXeoz

The writing is least decent, and the grammar is... I must say pretty bad? and the usage of punctuations, the inconsistency of it and how rush the story is, where there are some parts of the story that needs clarification. The capitalization too... I don't know, but it feels like this novel was written by a 13 year old. Sorry for being harsh, but yeah that's my review for this novel.

Revenge is always sweet

Tento

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TentoAuthorTento

Guess I need to study English more... I will try to improve the grammars and the explanation of things I was planning to explain it in the next few chapters

3yr

XeozLv10Xeoz

Yeah just take it slow and you'll get there, don't rush things. (and use [,but] not [but,] check independent clauses)

3yr

allmightyLv1allmighty

Well if you want better writing pay for it freeloader

3yr

XeozLv10Xeoz

?? It's a review?? What do want me to say? Sugar-coat all of it?

allmighty:Well if you want better writing pay for it freeloader

3yr

XeozLv10Xeoz

"Pay for better writing". Yes, that makes sense. Totally. I wish I could.

allmighty:Well if you want better writing pay for it freeloader

3yr