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I have no idea why this is rated so high. I found the character personalities shallow. The plot is outright lazy. The writer is obviously not an English speaker because the way the characters talk is atrocious, to say nothing about their reactions. Jason’s entire personality is that of a milksop. He kills people by the command of his 2 year old son but still stutters. His dialogue is unrealistic. I could go on. This story needs a total rewrite.

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Demon Queen Rebirth: I Reincarnated as a Living Armor?!

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you need a total rewrite as a person, your character is too shallow, lazy, you talk atrociously and your mom should had aborted you