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Detail review below I am sorry, but this is not the greatest DxD like other proclaim, in fact, this is only above average for this site and average if we count fanfic.net, QQ, and spacebattle. The mc being nekomata/nekoshou is already exist somewhere in fanfic, and iirc, create by fairy tail dragon slayer. So why this rating? First off, author have done the worst taboo he can do in reincarantion fic, in fact, he does it in world breaking record at chapter 3. He expose his secret to his mother. So why this is a taboo? Because this break the immersion of a reader, breaking metaknowledge, and make author look like lazy. Moreover, by breaking the taboo, it gonna make ur mother relationship seem fake in the future no matter how good u write it. There many way to expose the secret without breaking the story, but definitely not as early as chapter 3. Other may find it nothing big, that just mean u have not read good fanfic, with good story development. In my experience of reading fanfic, those who expose it suffer in story development for the backlash. Its a lose lose situation for rookie writer. Those who expose it early need a strong writing skill to not degrade the story which new writer not has the level of skill, and those that act like nothing happen after exposing it suffer from story development and annoy the reader because he ignore the consequences of exposing secret. (The cause and effect)
Highschool DxD: A new opportunity
Nyarlathotep00
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Hmmm... I don't really understand your obsession with it having to be like that. To begin with, you say it will affect the relationship with his mother making it seem fake. Let me ask you one thing. Don't you think that it is already strange how in those novels when the MC starts doing all those things no one questions him? The parents never doubt it and they just go along with it. You called the way I did it just being lazy, but for me when that other situation happens is being lazy too. Can you really say that no parents would start doubting their child?. In particular, the novels with middle ages setting are the worst. Where the superstitions are in full bloom and they just hate it any form of change. But the MC, acts like he knows it all and everyone starts to consider him some sort of God. About the meta knowledge thing... I ask again, Is it really that important? Where is the book that says you must never mention it?. Do think for a bit what kind of world is that. There are different worlds connected. Time travel is possible. People do sort of reincarnate there. Not to mention, reviving. And you questions that the MC told his mother he is a reincarnator. You only get irked by it because you are obsessed with it. Not for a legit reason. Again, consider the world they are. How many people there would give a f*CK about what he told his mother?. It is normal to 'not like' what I did, but you guys get way to overworked by it. Have a nice day... or night...!
Nyarlathotep00:Hmmm... I don't really understand your obsession with it having to be like that. To begin with, you say it will affect the relationship with his mother making it seem fake. Let me ask you one thing. Don't you think that it is already strange how in those novels when the MC starts doing all those things no one questions him? The parents never doubt it and they just go along with it. You called the way I did it just being lazy, but for me when that other situation happens is being lazy too. Can you really say that no parents would start doubting their child?. In particular, the novels with middle ages setting are the worst. Where the superstitions are in full bloom and they just hate it any form of change. But the MC, acts like he knows it all and everyone starts to consider him some sort of God. About the meta knowledge thing... I ask again, Is it really that important? Where is the book that says you must never mention it?. Do think for a bit what kind of world is that. There are different worlds connected. Time travel is possible. People do sort of reincarnate there. Not to mention, reviving. And you questions that the MC told his mother he is a reincarnator. You only get irked by it because you are obsessed with it. Not for a legit reason. Again, consider the world they are. How many people there would give a f*CK about what he told his mother?. It is normal to 'not like' what I did, but you guys get way to overworked by it. Have a nice day... or night...!
(comment unrelated to story) I still can't forget a novel I saw where the MC decides to break the taboo just to lick the original MC's balls..
Nymos_lvl9000:For me, the story automatically loses all fun when the MC decides to break the biggest taboo... My opinion I know that some people like it, but for me it doesn't
Feel free to stop reading. I am not forcing you to. Just like you are free to voice out your opinion, I can also tell you what I think.
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i did stop reading i just don't find it nessesary to announce i did, i just told similar readers the hate this type of thing not to waste ther time nothing more
Nyarlathotep00:Feel free to stop reading. I am not forcing you to. Just like you are free to voice out your opinion, I can also tell you what I think.
Nymos_lvl9000:For me, the story automatically loses all fun when the MC decides to break the biggest taboo... My opinion I know that some people like it, but for me it doesn't
Auther I don’t think your logic is wrong. It’s not a problem that you exposed his reincarnation to his mother with the logic you gave. But also neglect the change of relationship between his mother and him. You should take reference about this from the novel ‘The Beginning After The End’. I find that logical. A sort spoiler After mc expose his reincarnation to his parents their relationship goes super downhill. And that doesn’t mend untill his father dies
Nyarlathotep00:Hmmm... I don't really understand your obsession with it having to be like that. To begin with, you say it will affect the relationship with his mother making it seem fake. Let me ask you one thing. Don't you think that it is already strange how in those novels when the MC starts doing all those things no one questions him? The parents never doubt it and they just go along with it. You called the way I did it just being lazy, but for me when that other situation happens is being lazy too. Can you really say that no parents would start doubting their child?. In particular, the novels with middle ages setting are the worst. Where the superstitions are in full bloom and they just hate it any form of change. But the MC, acts like he knows it all and everyone starts to consider him some sort of God. About the meta knowledge thing... I ask again, Is it really that important? Where is the book that says you must never mention it?. Do think for a bit what kind of world is that. There are different worlds connected. Time travel is possible. People do sort of reincarnate there. Not to mention, reviving. And you questions that the MC told his mother he is a reincarnator. You only get irked by it because you are obsessed with it. Not for a legit reason. Again, consider the world they are. How many people there would give a f*CK about what he told his mother?. It is normal to 'not like' what I did, but you guys get way to overworked by it. Have a nice day... or night...!
I think you're both right I feel you should've built it up more but it's not lazy I mean you have a great story and it was your creative choice to reveal the secret early
Nyarlathotep00:Hmmm... I don't really understand your obsession with it having to be like that. To begin with, you say it will affect the relationship with his mother making it seem fake. Let me ask you one thing. Don't you think that it is already strange how in those novels when the MC starts doing all those things no one questions him? The parents never doubt it and they just go along with it. You called the way I did it just being lazy, but for me when that other situation happens is being lazy too. Can you really say that no parents would start doubting their child?. In particular, the novels with middle ages setting are the worst. Where the superstitions are in full bloom and they just hate it any form of change. But the MC, acts like he knows it all and everyone starts to consider him some sort of God. About the meta knowledge thing... I ask again, Is it really that important? Where is the book that says you must never mention it?. Do think for a bit what kind of world is that. There are different worlds connected. Time travel is possible. People do sort of reincarnate there. Not to mention, reviving. And you questions that the MC told his mother he is a reincarnator. You only get irked by it because you are obsessed with it. Not for a legit reason. Again, consider the world they are. How many people there would give a f*CK about what he told his mother?. It is normal to 'not like' what I did, but you guys get way to overworked by it. Have a nice day... or night...!
OH please no.. that novel has high rating but so.bland especially mc who is dull and dumb.. you'd get bored and mc going here and there telling he want to be harem king worse than isse Mc is basically slave of three factions he does however others want em
trueidiocy_577:winds of change has 4.9 rating and first chapter he exposes DxD is fiction to Draig and Albion
Man_of_culture_69:OH please no.. that novel has high rating but so.bland especially mc who is dull and dumb.. you'd get bored and mc going here and there telling he want to be harem king worse than isse Mc is basically slave of three factions he does however others want em