Review Detail of Lexi_Roberson in I Dare Not Hope

I think that your story is very intriguing. The first chapter kept me wanting to read it, and I found myself deep into the world. It also made me very anxious as well. You did an amazing job at describing the fire, and the scenery overall. Keep it up! I look forward to more chapters. I didn't check for grammar, but I do always recommend checking it. This is for all writers that I have reviewed so far. Good job, and happy writing. :)