Review Detail of Ninewive in Steel Waste
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The author killed everyone and destroy everything. so the Whole freaking story doesn't matter, the whole kingdom building arc where he transformed Big mountain doesn't matter. everyone died!!! the end.
Steel Waste
Niggross
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You saved me, I felt a hype when I saw the story and the number of chapters but with your comment you saved me a big disappointment, I immediately went to look at the titles at the end of the story and some pieces of it and I don't regret getting the spoiler, the story may even be good based on other comments but with an ending like that i would ruin it for me, thanks for your sacrifice.
It was a super good fan fic, just the last 20 chapters of this 709 chapter behemoth were rushed is all. If you played Fallout 3'd Mothership Zeta DLC, you'd know the Zetans launched the nukes, and had been planning to wipe out humanity for several centuries. It'd only be a matter of time until they finished the job. (Assuming the "canon" ending of the DLC happened in this fic's timeline, it'd make sense for them to come in fully prepped about 10 years after one of their motherships got captured by human escapees.) Zetans were hinted at every now and then, but the last 20 or so chapters just felt far too sudden.
guilherme99gc:You saved me, I felt a hype when I saw the story and the number of chapters but with your comment you saved me a big disappointment, I immediately went to look at the titles at the end of the story and some pieces of it and I don't regret getting the spoiler, the story may even be good based on other comments but with an ending like that i would ruin it for me, thanks for your sacrifice.image
It may even be good, but from what I saw at the end it won't please me, why spend time reading getting attached to some characters for the author to end everything at the end and disappoint me more.
Daoistz861E7:It was a super good fan fic, just the last 20 chapters of this 709 chapter behemoth were rushed is all. If you played Fallout 3'd Mothership Zeta DLC, you'd know the Zetans launched the nukes, and had been planning to wipe out humanity for several centuries. It'd only be a matter of time until they finished the job. (Assuming the "canon" ending of the DLC happened in this fic's timeline, it'd make sense for them to come in fully prepped about 10 years after one of their motherships got captured by human escapees.) Zetans were hinted at every now and then, but the last 20 or so chapters just felt far too sudden.
In my opinion it's worth reading the whole thing, even with that ending. I don't regret reading it in the slightest. It's the best (and longest) Fallout fic I've ever seen.
guilherme99gc:It may even be good, but from what I saw at the end it won't please me, why spend time reading getting attached to some characters for the author to end everything at the end and disappoint me more.