I know not everyone body is perfect with writing. However, I can’t tell who is speaking and the grammar is horrible. Hope you read this so you know what to fix.
Shimizu_
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LIKEFor a first basis, I would use grammarly which is free unless you would like the rich-folk version. I’d also make sure to read as it edits, at times it messes up the sentences, or changes names. I’d also try reading your story outloud afterwords. I would look at is as any other book, and ask myself if this makes sense to me. If you would like a touch it up, you could slide in fancier words in replacement for other words to make an awesomer vocabulary.
Shimizu_:That will be so awesome