OreoGirl
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OreoGirl2yrReplied to yoyo4- OreoGirl2yrCommented
*be independent
She just turned 14 two weeks ago, Virgo and proud, laugh out loud. Ruby had got her hair cut in a large lion mane accidentally, puffy, it was suppose to be a page boy, but her hair was thick. Instead it was fluffy and it already had grown out. Her eyes were brown with flecks of gold. She had decided to walk to school instead of riding in the warmth but she was determined to start independent and be one of the cool kids on the bus even with a lion mane. - OreoGirl2yrCommented
Awesome grammar
The day started off crisp and cold for the first day of school. The trees were red and gold mixed with green. The mountain air was crisp and Ruby had just walked Kyoto a beautiful black golden doodle with amber eyes. He was full of sass and ready to hunt rabbits. - OreoGirl2yrReplied to Sophie_Slade
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If you liked the book feel free to leave a review!
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Sadly I canât say I got far in the book before being pulled away by something else. What I can say is that this book is by far the most greatest book Iâve stumbled upon in this application. This book has excellent grammar, with advanced descriptions and an excellent sight into the character herself. The development is realistic and taps into the real world which I like how it blends into her book unlike most books. I am excited to see how this book comes along.
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WaNt SoMe wHiNe WiTh ThAt NaP
She took off her pack, and placed it next to a large rock. She wrapped up her cloak to use as a cushion, and laid her head on it. She had no intention of dosing off, but she just wanted to rest her eyes for a bit. Feeling the breeze hit her face, and listening to the rustling of the leaves, Val fell into a bit of a trance. Suddenly, before she knew it, she had drifted off. - OreoGirl2yrCommented
Pickpocket me đjk
Val was actually on her way to do a job. No longer was she going to be doing the petty little acts like pick pocketing or snatching a few small morsels here and there. From now on, she was only going to be acquiring for those who had pockets big enough to give a decent reward. And she was on her first job with such a criteria. - OreoGirl3yrReplied to Lynne_Mercadel
Thanks, Its slow at updates however Hope you enjoy
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For a first basis, I would use grammarly which is free unless you would like the rich-folk version. Iâd also make sure to read as it edits, at times it messes up the sentences, or changes names. Iâd also try reading your story outloud afterwords. I would look at is as any other book, and ask myself if this makes sense to me. If you would like a touch it up, you could slide in fancier words in replacement for other words to make an awesomer vocabulary.
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May I have a cup, Miss?
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Kill her
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Bc there sexy
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