Review Detail of Zerofuggs in Outside Paradise

There are almost no grammatically errors throughout the whole story that I've read through so far. Characters are interesting and have depth, however at some points they feel underdefined. Frequency of updates is commendable, when referring to the detail found in the writing. The world starts out with a dense personality, but slowly expands allowing for greater versatility. overall, I am quite impressed by the quality of writing, and dedication to the work you've shown, and hope to be able to follow your work in the future.