Review Detail of RJMidnight in Ancient Force

Your worldbuilding and descriptive writing is amazing, it paints a picture and pulls you into the story. You writing is really good with tiny mistakes that are barely noticable (unless someone was trying to look for them). Your pacing is going good, so please keep with that and this story will surly become popular. Your prologue/first chapter was a well written, attention grabbing, chapter. Keep up the good work!