The story is interesting and introduces the characters pretty well. I like the snall interaction between the unknown man and the succubus, and how the plot unfolds from there. I wish you the best on your book author 👍

The premise is interesting and the characters are well described and introduced. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and good luck! 😊

Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. Though there's some grammatical errors, the flow of the story is good. I wish you the best on your book author 😊

Great story you have there, and the premise is quite interesting. I can't wait for more chapters to come out. I wish you the best on your book!

Great story, and the premise is quite interesting. I can't wait for more chapters to come out. I wish you the best on your book nd look forward to further aspects of this story.

Interesting premise and the characters are well described and written. However, there are a few grammatical errors which could be worked on. Otherwise good job!

Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. I wish you the best on your book author and look forward to seeing more chapters released.

Great premise, the world building is great and the characters are well described. Your English is well written and brings out the true potential of this story. I can't wait to see how you do on your book. Good luck!

An interesting premise. The characters are well described and written. Good job on the book. I wish you the best on your book author 👍👍👍👍

Premise is interesting and the characters are well described in the story. Overall the world building is also good. I wish you the best on your book author 😊

Thanks a lot

Amazing world building, the way you describe the characters and their emotions is nothing short of amazing. Keep up the good work 😊😊👌👌👌👌

A story well written and the characters are well described. The flow of the story is smooth. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story. I wish you the best on your book. 👍

Your story is well written, nd the characters are well introduced. There are many elements in the story which come as a surprise to me. I wish you the best in your book, good luck!

Thanks a lot!

Off to a food start, the characters are well described and i csn visualize it well. I look forward to seeing more chapters coming out. Keep up the good work!

The writing quality is well written and the premise is very interesting, i wish you the best on your book and look forward to seeing many more works from you 👍

Thank you so much!

That's cool, after all creativity must start from somewhere or something 👍

Interesting premise, I can't wait to see the Mc become stronger and not scare screw up haha. The characters are well described too. I wish you the best on your book author 👍