Review Detail of wahab in A'void dark
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A very confusing novel. It did not make any sense. I really tried to read it. However I had to give up....... Sorry to the writer. Maybe if it's rewritten I would try again. I just felt lost while reading.
A'void dark
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Well, the beginning certainly does need a revamp but sadly I don't really have the time required, I don't know where you stopped. Or if you stopped, but the story only really starts after chapter 50 or so, it picks up a little. It's a slow story so yeah, and I know that there are really many badly written things in the beginning. Well, can't blame you, I hope you will come back to read once again.