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wahab

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2018-03-17 JoinedKuwait
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    Man I can't read that. Believe me people will hate it

    Ch -1 ...::: Prime Evolver System - Version 1 - 5.025% - (LU - CH42) :::...
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    Prime Evolver System
    Urban · Shaele
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    Download Grammerly it can help you fix most of your language problems.

    Ch 29 Chapter 29: Another time-skip.
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    A cripple in medieval world
    War · Pham_Minh_Khue
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    Why didn't he evolve his blood manipulation skill yet?

    Ch 108 Fourteen days, Two weeks & Taking separate paths (Part 1)
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    How is he fighting? Why can he kill a boss monster?

    Ch 7 Decimating Floor 1 Like a Boss!
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    Classless Ascension
    Urban · ClasslessAscension
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Posted

    I read to chapter 20 and couldn't continue. I am sorry but the story is boring. The writing quality is good however the story isn't engaging

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    Noob Player
    Games · HotIce
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    Please remove the pirecy thing. It's really annoying. Thanks for a great novel

    Ch 80 Crowded
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    Pantheon Online
    Games · Antihero
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    Raised by goat ?! That's new

    Ch 13 Cooked Rice
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    He has 0s for stats but chooses to stay that way while knowing he is even weaker than the average!!

    Ch 14 Leveling Up
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    Ascension: Online
    Games · Cyclxne
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    Is this a joke? He knows he needs to lvl but won't kill a mob!!

    Ch 13 First Blood
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    Ascension: Online
    Games · Cyclxne
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    You reminded of the borg from startrek

    Ch 28 Soldiers
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    Alien Evolution System
    Fantasy · John_Doever
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Posted

    A great story. One started reading, I couldn't stop. The pace is good and it keeps you engaged. People should give it a try. I highly recommend it.

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    My Faᵵe System
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Replied to ArkAnghel

    Will do. Thanks for replying

    Ch 6 Ability reveal
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    All Time Marksman
    War · ArkAnghel
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    Why is the discription of the novel is different than the content of it. Please add vrmmo tag. The synopsis implies apocalypse theme and real world system.

    Ch 6 Ability reveal
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    All Time Marksman
    War · ArkAnghel
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Posted

    Very poorly written novel. Please read over your work and do some editing / rewriting. I really tried to continue to read more but it's too confusing

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    What happened to the rewards he was supposed to receive?

    Ch 7 Wiser than you think part 1
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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    Didn't he have to go to the starting point to his reward?

    Ch 5 An uncertain journey
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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    I am confused who is tracing him or /and feeding on him? The writing is not clear and hard to follow

    Ch 4 The Final Tutorial
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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    I think you need someone to edit your work and help make it flow better.

    Ch 3 A NEW BEGINNING AFTER THE END Part 2
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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    OK this is getting boring. When does the story pick up the pace?

    Ch 18 The scheme
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    Multi-Gene
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • wahab
    wahab2yr
    Commented

    This chapter is pointless. It's a repeat of a previous chapter

    Ch 127 The Difference of Level 5 Troop Class
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    Lord of the Oasis
    Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao
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