Review Detail of dayamaryllis in Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)
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There are some minor plot holes like "Why would the ceo be the first guinea pig to test a new technology?" but these can usually be ignored in the name of suspending disbelief. I like the writing style and characters. The only thing that bothers me is the author uses words that sound similar to the words they want to use or misspelled words occasionally. Its still easy to know what they mean to say but I notice one of these mistakes once every other chapter so the main thing this story is missing is more proofreading.
Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)
Andru_9788
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I totally understand you are doing such a big project and its easy to miss. I will put in comments when i see in the future.
Andru_9788:My apologies, I don't have an editor and work with multiple words a day. May you please correct me in the In-chapter comments when you spot a mistake as it is easy for me to miss those details. Thank you đ