Review Detail of BukanOrang in Hollywood RE:CODED

Essa novel está muito boa, eu só te peço uma coisa manda dois capítulos por dia se for muito pelo menos 1 capitulo por dia pra não me matar de ansiedade

Sube más rápido los capítulos ya que esta buena la historia

you need an editor I read half of chapter 1 before stopping due to quantity of mistakes I love these sorts of novels it's a shame so many people quit writing it

really? that many? maybe i need it, i've been independent so far. do you have any recommendation for free editor or something? i'm broke

needs an editor don't stop writing

try reading I am in Hollywood if the pointless *** and references are taken out it would be a great novel but due to authors idiotic fantasy's he or she ruined their story

I just finished reading all the chapters and I must say I like your story very much, still there are some things that I must say :- 1.Dont give up on the novel and try to release more chapters in the beginning because many people don't read those stories which have less than 100 chapters. So keep at it and I am sure more people will pick up the story later. 2.Tone the flirting down a bit, I mean he doesn't need to flirt with every female he sees, looks like he is desperate... 3.I saw the harem tag, if you are thinking of making it harem I urge you not to because this is modern society and nobody really likes harem in modern society, shows that the MC is not loyal enough. 4.You are doing everything right apart form the things that I mentioned so keep writing and I assure you you will get more readers..

I really want to read your story, but am unable to due the errors that are for me jarring it's weird if it was machine translated I could accept the flaws due to being use to it but knowing it isn't, or at least doesn't appear to the mistakes stand out hope you keep writing

please if you decide to include a harem as tag suggests make it realistic for example MC being single with one night stands with a few people before they become globally famous ( wonder woman actress is example of someone MC could meet etc before global success) when MC settles down and if still with harem have it that it's not only actresses could have a lawyer, business mogul could have it that MC ends in 3some with a lesbian couple and they get along etc after

Have you considered having Al produce famous tv shows in the 90s like friends, greys anatomy, and power rangers.

Dose he become a acter at any point ??