Review Detail of loskro in Firestorm Shinobi

The chapter will end up getting longer that's for sure. More descriptive writing will come in later also. I actually haven't really fleshed out the world, and thank you for telling me that. I'll work on it. I have a question. How many chapters did you read? The characters slowly get more and more development throughout the story. The big events for the characters just haven't happened yet. This story is still being worked on, but the chapters that have been posted so far were created a while ago so you will see the writing get continuously better.