I really loved how you set up the story with a quote in the very beginning. You don't see many of those, and when you do appreciate them!!! I definitely appreciated this!!! I did find some grammar mistakes, but what author does have those right? I recommend running it through some grammar error apps. I thought the character development of Cesia was nice, I just wish I had more of that in the beginning. I also thought the background of the Gods was a little vague. I know we all know who the "Gods" are, but I would love to see how you put that into the story. I really love this story and the direction it is heading in. I've added it to my library, and hope to read it soon!!! I want to mention this is the author of Totally In Love, and the user from the forum known as BellsandLexShow!!!!
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