Review Detail of Jay_Corbitt_0777 in Lucifer's Descendant System

i really like the book but there are just to many instances where im lkke no one is that dense, the train ride and everyone just accepting he could read body language as if thats a thing. the fa t that he would trust his life with people that stupud, and the fact that he couldnt come up with a betterstiry or that he even cares. He is already showing multiple skills and the reason given why thats an issue just doesnt make any sense. He wants money and his current skills would rank him as a C class or higher yet he hasnt gine to get reevaluated. once again i think the book has alot of potential but just to many plot holes and unbelievable situatioms for me to keep reading.